Pine’s writer of the week!

Pine’s writer of the week is Molly who worked very hard to write independently this week.

Here is part of her adventure story:

The villain entered the door and tiptoed into the hall. The villain dashed into the hall and she fell into the hole. The villain got captured with the net and mess. The villain was captured in the hole in the ground. Emily, the villain, tried to get out but she could not escape. Emily got tied with a rope as tight it could be so the villain could not get out.

One comment on “Pine’s writer of the week!

  • Katrina says:

    There is a relative clause in the first sentence. It’s ‘Molly who worked very hard’ so yay. Yay relative clauses.


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