This week Year 4 finished writing their Space adventure stories. Have a read of Daniel’s whole story in Chestnut Class below. It really is super! Can you think about where he has used the S2S really successfully or where he has added personality into his writing?
I could feel my body shivering as I went into the enormous, giant rocket. My legs were shaking like an earthquake. As I sat in my comfortable seat the rocket began to tremble. I was terrified but excited to get to space. When… WHOOSH! We were off!
As fast as I could I went to my rounded window and saw bright stars surrounding my ship. I stared at the Earth and saw the hot blazing sun shooting fireballs at me. I gazed at the colourful, dusty planet moving past me as if they were having a race. Everything was an amazing sight! The shining, glimmering galaxies shone onto my ship and it was glowing a silver colour.
Suddenly my high-tech rocket began to shake. Instantly a nasty problem started to occur. BANG! I heard an enormous crash! I went quickly to my window and saw my engine falling onto the planet under me. What could I do now? Who could help me in this mess? I started to panic…
I landed on the mysterious planet below. It was freezing and dirty. I felt terrified. But then I saw my high-tech engine lying on the planet. I went to collect it, thank goodness it wasn’t damaged too much. I started bouncing to my helpful handy toolkit to fix my ship. I felt brave now. As I was fixing my ship I was so tired after one hour. At last it was fixed! Whoo!
I felt happy and excited. I bounced back into my enormous rocket. It roared back into action and shot off as fast as a jaguar. I couldn’t wait to get home to tell everybody about my adventure!