Persuasive Writing

Check out Faith’s persuasive writing about whether zoos are fair:

Dear Mrs May,

I am writing to you to urge you to close cruel zoos. I believe passionately that zoos can cause animals stress and harm. I know you are the  best Prime Minister there has ever been so I can trust in you to make the right choice.

Firstly the animals are caused stress because they have been imprisoned. In addition to this animals do not have enough space to roam around. Surely you want to animals to be happy?

5 comments on “Persuasive Writing

  • Haniya says:

    think zoo’s should be closed down because The animals are supposed to be free but in zoo’s they are imprisoned

  • Haniya says:

    Because some people say they get constant shelter;others say they don’t since they just lay around all day while flashing lights from the photos and selfies that we take pierce their eyes and hurt them -especially at evening or night.


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