Wonderful Writing

In Literacy we are writing a persuasive letter to the Prime Minister about whether zoos should be open or permanently closed. Keep checking back for more examples.

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Lawford Mead Primary School,

Trent Road,

Chelmsford,

CM1 2JH

Wednesday 11th January 2017

Dear Mrs May,

I am writing to you today because I am frustrated about how wild animals are treated in zoos. As the Prime Minister we expect you to know about this. I believe that all zoos should be permanently shut down. I hope that you will respect my decision. As an animal lover you should know how the animals are being treated. Your country is counting on you…

By Evie O’Brien, Cedar

Lawford Mead Primary School,

Trent Road,

Chelmsford,

CM1 2JH

 

Wednesday 11th January 2017

Dear Mrs May,

I am writing to you today in sheer disappointment about zoos. Without doubt I want zoos to be permanently shut down for prevention of cruelty and for the animals to be released into their natural habitat. As you are the most powerful person in England, I hope you read on..

 

By Marianna Reale. Cedar

7 comments on “Wonderful Writing

  • Haniya says:

    I think animals should also be free from circuses because i heard they get whipped and get cruel treatment to do really cool tricks. Plus,its not really their nature for elephants to do hula hooping and monkeys to make coffee!!

    Reply
  • Haniya says:

    Once I went to a safari park in Indonesia. I think the animal keepers treated them harshly because I saw a big lion and his food/drink bowl was as big as two cat food bowls. At least,that is how i remember it. I was 3 back then..

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    • CBaghurst says:

      Wow! The fact you were three and still remember this shows it has had an impact upon your views on safaris!

      Reply

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