This week I have picked some writers rather than just one writer. This is because I was super impressed with a group of children in my class during a shared writing session. Collaboratively, they created this fantastic paragraph of a recount:
In the afternoon, we all gathered around the long table, feeling very excited! Firstly, Sarah quickly rolled balls of dough to us, that she had already mixed. Then we had to fold and knead the dough which was very sticky and stretchy. I thought it smelled delicious. It was fun to make and when it was finished the bread was really tasty.
Well done to Smitha, Hudson, Lacy-Jane, Kian and Aleah for the brilliant team effort.
Miss Middleton.
