This week’s star writer is Callum S, who blew us away with his persuasive advert. A perfect blend of technical information and humour, with a very professional twist.
He performed his advert to the class, and to some of the visiting mum’s, who were here for the MAGS day, receiving rapturous applause and spontaneous laughter! Delivered with confidence, effective and enthusiastic expression and clever pace!
Here is the final script!
Right now I am driving a hero, a luxury machine, made for one or the whole family, which won the most influential car award in 1999.
It has a 4 cylinder engine. Anyone guess what it is? Hands up…
YES! It is the new Ford Model T. It has great powerful breaks and is ready to roll.
It has the most flashy headlights and comfy leather seats, costing just $999.99 to buy!
Go to your closest Ford dealer today or look at our website www.Ford.co.uk/Model T
T&C’s apply, participating dealers only, must have license to buy.
Call 01245595959 to find out more.
Ford – Wheels to Victory!
We loved his use of slogans and rhetorical questions and all agreed we would be persuaded to buy one.
(Note – website and phone number are fictional, and the Model T is no longer in production – sorry to disappoint you)